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test groups didn't like pain face.  more smiles?

blood's a no go. 

loud.  too loud.  please, less of loud.

could baby come out of somewhere else?

 

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unrealistic

had trouble relating

motive?

will this arc hold up?

overall, ok idea, but make funnier?

 

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Can we make less awkward?

Male lead needs replacing.

'how much do I owe you' joke wasn't funny.

"are you in yet" is cliché

Less apologizing at end.

 

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too much fluff, can we make edgy?

needs conflict

interruption at alter?

cake could be funnier

 

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Too dark.                                                      

Seemed predictable.

Little 'cry' heavy.

Not appealing to 18-34 demo.

Tested poorly.  Can we bring back to life? make it happen.