test groups didn't like pain face. more smiles?
blood's a no go.
loud. too loud. please, less of loud.
could baby come out of somewhere else?
unrealistic
had trouble relating
motive?
will this arc hold up?
overall, ok idea, but make funnier?
Can we make less awkward?
Male lead needs replacing.
'how much do I owe you' joke wasn't funny.
"are you in yet" is cliché
Less apologizing at end.
too much fluff, can we make edgy?
needs conflict
interruption at alter?
cake could be funnier
Too dark.
Seemed predictable.
Little 'cry' heavy.
Not appealing to 18-34 demo.
Tested poorly. Can we bring back to life? make it happen.
